A commission for someone I did based off an idea. The idea of accidentally losing pieces of clothes and revealing parts gradually. Among those practices that were applied to actual movies was that of which happened to Captain Hook from Peter Pan when it came to him and The Crocodile Toc.
It seems Mai has a similar nemesis; a sea serpent named Zhao. (That's "Jaws" in Chinese.) Well...Mai isn't chinese really; she's from Hong Kong. But the setting here has her out at the China Sea for some reason.
And for some other reason; she apparently is clinging for dear life to a cliff.
And too late she discovers she is NOT alone.
The serpent Zhao has caught sight of her. Now in Peter Pan has often referred to Hook as a "Codfish." Here; we refer to Mai as a "Catfish" due to her simply being a cat. Ultimately though; Hook was a bad guy and Mai here is a hero...of sorts. I think I peg her more of an anti-hero.
So per what happened via Peter Pan at Skull Rock; the serpent (like toc) aims for Mai bottom first. And while he successfully rips off a part of her blouse; he tries again....this time catching her spandex.
This is where the Mature filter comes in. Because that spandex Mai wears is pretty much her underwear. And upon trying to pull it back up; it causes her to lose her grip; and we can see the result. Zhao tears a hole in the spandex revealing her bottom.
Now Mai is in the jaws of the beast trying to free herself but keeping his mouth pried open with her legs. And like Hook her clothes are now all tattered and ruined.
And like one scene from the movie; she is holding Zhao's mouth open; only to have it slam down on her left foot. She jumps up loosening her shoe and holding her foot only to be brought back down into the jaws of the beast. Good view of her bottom there. XD
Luckily; she isn't alone with the sea serpent. One of her partners; Sarah Brendhart is coming by via speed boat. Signaling to her; Mai starts running along the serpent's back as Sarah reaches out to grab her, Now here I changed the process a bit. In Peter Pan; Hook falls back into the water and tries swimming away from the Crocodile; only to ram his head into the cave wall and the Croc forcing him out in a very nasty way.
For Mai; I didn't want her to go through that. She's going through enough Hell here already.![:B]( "Bucktooth")
So I decided to just have her collide with Zhao's tail.
And here I discovered something else. While there are some erotic tones here; seeing Mai collide with the serpent's tail and Sarah's reaction to it; I genuinely found pretty funny. Sick I know; but the reaction is pretty funny I have to admit. XD
Not for long though; cause the serpent is rearing out to grab her. Not if Sarah grabs her first. Sarah grabs Mai's bare foot and swings her into the boat. it's a rough landing for Mai; but at least she's out of the water and harm's way. And once more; the serpent accidentally bites his own tail. He's now holding it in pain and Sarah drives away with an exhausted Mai looking back and growling at Zhao.
The rattled and ultimately humiliated Mai Ling just sits in the boat and asks Sarah to not mention anything about this to their boss Carmelita Fox. Yes; these two are Sly Cooper OCs of mine if you didn't know already.
I added some blush to Mai that seems to indicate embarrassment. Or something else too; considering she was exposed to water and now is sitting in the boat with wet tattered clothes.
I think the following conversation between these two would go something like this after the last panel:
Mai Ling: Sarah...Please, PLEASE do NOT tell Carmelita about this.
Sarah: Don't worry, I won't. And sorry about having to throw you in the boat like that.
Mai Ling: Well that's better than getting...ah...getting..ah...ah..ACHOO!!! Eaten..(sniffles.)
Sarah: You alright hon?
Mai Ling: Ergh...(sniff)...that lousy thing not only gave me a hard time he gave me this...ah...ACHOO!!!! Cold....(She then lets out a huge sneeze.) Ohhhh...my head.
Sarah: (Shaking her head solemnly.) Oh, you poor thing. You really did have a rough day.
Mai Ling: Yeah...(sniffles)...I dunno what hurts more: my head or my...ACHOO!!...pride.
Sarah: Well let's get you home and I'll help you feel better. I know a brilliant recipe for chicken soup.
And that's where Mai lets out an even more sickening groan. Sarah; she may have a big heart and means well. But she's a terrible cook. I imagine Mai's just being polite cause Sarah saved her hide. So she'll have to endure some pretty nasty chicken soup; along with her dignity being tattered with her clothes.
Poor Mai. She really did have a bad day. Still; I think I put her in far worse situations than this. Or at least...humiliating.
So ends one of my biggest commissions. But I did it because it was based off a subject I found interesting indeed. And Mai's such a versatile character to work with. Her body type really does allow for animation with her to be possible. And that's what I did with all this. Make it like an actual animation.
Of course it got resized due to DA standards. I do have a full sized version of this for those who are willing to download it.![;)]( ";) (Wink)")
And while I am quite proud of my results; I still have issues with all comics I do. Consistency is tough; especially when characters resize a bit and some morph too much. XD I guess the size difference between Mai and Sarah is noticeable. Well; you can tell a lot of work went into this; so um...tick tock. Heh heh; tick tock. XD
I'm sure my commissioner enjoyed it. And I appreciated his patience.
Mai Ling and Sarah Brendhart belong to me shinragod
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It seems Mai has a similar nemesis; a sea serpent named Zhao. (That's "Jaws" in Chinese.) Well...Mai isn't chinese really; she's from Hong Kong. But the setting here has her out at the China Sea for some reason.
And for some other reason; she apparently is clinging for dear life to a cliff.
And too late she discovers she is NOT alone.
The serpent Zhao has caught sight of her. Now in Peter Pan has often referred to Hook as a "Codfish." Here; we refer to Mai as a "Catfish" due to her simply being a cat. Ultimately though; Hook was a bad guy and Mai here is a hero...of sorts. I think I peg her more of an anti-hero.
So per what happened via Peter Pan at Skull Rock; the serpent (like toc) aims for Mai bottom first. And while he successfully rips off a part of her blouse; he tries again....this time catching her spandex.
This is where the Mature filter comes in. Because that spandex Mai wears is pretty much her underwear. And upon trying to pull it back up; it causes her to lose her grip; and we can see the result. Zhao tears a hole in the spandex revealing her bottom.
Now Mai is in the jaws of the beast trying to free herself but keeping his mouth pried open with her legs. And like Hook her clothes are now all tattered and ruined.
And like one scene from the movie; she is holding Zhao's mouth open; only to have it slam down on her left foot. She jumps up loosening her shoe and holding her foot only to be brought back down into the jaws of the beast. Good view of her bottom there. XD
Luckily; she isn't alone with the sea serpent. One of her partners; Sarah Brendhart is coming by via speed boat. Signaling to her; Mai starts running along the serpent's back as Sarah reaches out to grab her, Now here I changed the process a bit. In Peter Pan; Hook falls back into the water and tries swimming away from the Crocodile; only to ram his head into the cave wall and the Croc forcing him out in a very nasty way.
For Mai; I didn't want her to go through that. She's going through enough Hell here already.
So I decided to just have her collide with Zhao's tail.And here I discovered something else. While there are some erotic tones here; seeing Mai collide with the serpent's tail and Sarah's reaction to it; I genuinely found pretty funny. Sick I know; but the reaction is pretty funny I have to admit. XD
Not for long though; cause the serpent is rearing out to grab her. Not if Sarah grabs her first. Sarah grabs Mai's bare foot and swings her into the boat. it's a rough landing for Mai; but at least she's out of the water and harm's way. And once more; the serpent accidentally bites his own tail. He's now holding it in pain and Sarah drives away with an exhausted Mai looking back and growling at Zhao.
The rattled and ultimately humiliated Mai Ling just sits in the boat and asks Sarah to not mention anything about this to their boss Carmelita Fox. Yes; these two are Sly Cooper OCs of mine if you didn't know already.
I added some blush to Mai that seems to indicate embarrassment. Or something else too; considering she was exposed to water and now is sitting in the boat with wet tattered clothes.
I think the following conversation between these two would go something like this after the last panel:
Mai Ling: Sarah...Please, PLEASE do NOT tell Carmelita about this.
Sarah: Don't worry, I won't. And sorry about having to throw you in the boat like that.
Mai Ling: Well that's better than getting...ah...getting..ah...ah..ACHOO!!! Eaten..(sniffles.)
Sarah: You alright hon?
Mai Ling: Ergh...(sniff)...that lousy thing not only gave me a hard time he gave me this...ah...ACHOO!!!! Cold....(She then lets out a huge sneeze.) Ohhhh...my head.
Sarah: (Shaking her head solemnly.) Oh, you poor thing. You really did have a rough day.
Mai Ling: Yeah...(sniffles)...I dunno what hurts more: my head or my...ACHOO!!...pride.
Sarah: Well let's get you home and I'll help you feel better. I know a brilliant recipe for chicken soup.
And that's where Mai lets out an even more sickening groan. Sarah; she may have a big heart and means well. But she's a terrible cook. I imagine Mai's just being polite cause Sarah saved her hide. So she'll have to endure some pretty nasty chicken soup; along with her dignity being tattered with her clothes.
Poor Mai. She really did have a bad day. Still; I think I put her in far worse situations than this. Or at least...humiliating.
So ends one of my biggest commissions. But I did it because it was based off a subject I found interesting indeed. And Mai's such a versatile character to work with. Her body type really does allow for animation with her to be possible. And that's what I did with all this. Make it like an actual animation.
Of course it got resized due to DA standards. I do have a full sized version of this for those who are willing to download it.
And while I am quite proud of my results; I still have issues with all comics I do. Consistency is tough; especially when characters resize a bit and some morph too much. XD I guess the size difference between Mai and Sarah is noticeable. Well; you can tell a lot of work went into this; so um...tick tock. Heh heh; tick tock. XD
I'm sure my commissioner enjoyed it. And I appreciated his patience.
Mai Ling and Sarah Brendhart belong to me shinragod
